《大学英语读写》课程教学资源（A）Ⅱ_四级资源_作文_四级作文——分析原因类

四级作文---分析原因/危害类行文思路描述现象段总体概括现象（主题句）一具体描述现象的现状、表现、特点或受关注程度（要求结合图中内容）分析原因段表明自己观点—原因1一（原因2—原因3）个人看法/情况段总体评论现象/总述个人情况（主题句）一对现象进行客观评论/具体说明个人情况或理由一总结全文，可以提出建议或展望The overuse of computerin Modern Life描述现象段（结合描述图片）As is illustrated in the picture, a man is hooked on a computer at home, workand play. Even when he is asleep, he dreams of sitting in front of a computer.Seemingly funny,the picture reveals a severe social problem that computers areoverused in modern life.分析原因段Three factors contribute to the overuse of computers. To begin with, informationrevolution has greatly facilitated our work.We communicated with our colleagues viaemail or instant messaging. Secondly, the rising prosperity gives us access to theinternet at home, making our life convenient. Purchases can be made online at home,which saves us time and trouble. Finally, the Internet serves as a amazing source ofentertainment and recreation. As a result, adults and youngsters might get addicted toon lineactivities个人看法/总结段From myperspectives,the excessiveuse of computers may have extremelynegative impacts on our life. Obsessed with the net, students might neglect theiracademic studiesandfamiliesmightbecomealienated.Therefore,weshouldmakeaproperuse of computerandtheinternet.设计亮点---描述现象亮点句式（第一段）概述现象1.Nowadavs,there follows a crazefor diplomas and certificates in our society2.As more people focus on health diet, green food has begun to draw more and

四级作文-分析原因/危害类 行文思路 描述现象段 总体概括现象（主题句）—具体描述现象的现状、表现、 特点或受关注程度（要求结合图中内容） 分析原因段 表明自己观点—原因 1—（原因 2—原因 3） 个人看法/情况段 总体评论现象/总述个人情况（主题句）—对现象进行客 观评论/具体说明个人情况或理由—总结全文，可以提出 建议或展望 The overuse of computer in Modern Life 描述现象段（结合描述图片） As is illustrated in the picture, a man is hooked on a computer at home, work, and play. Even when he is asleep, he dreams of sitting in front of a computer. Seemingly funny, the picture reveals a severe social problem that computers are overused in modern life. 分析原因段 Three factors contribute to the overuse of computers. To begin with, information revolution has greatly facilitated our work. We communicated with our colleagues via email or instant messaging. Secondly, the rising prosperity gives us access to the internet at home, making our life convenient. Purchases can be made online at home, which saves us time and trouble. Finally, the Internet serves as a amazing source of entertainment and recreation. As a result, adults and youngsters might get addicted to on line activities. 个人看法/总结段 From my perspectives, the excessive use of computers may have extremely negative impacts on our life. Obsessed with the net, students might neglect their academic studies and families might become alienated. Therefore, we should make a proper use of computer and the internet. 设计亮点-描述现象亮点句式（第一段） ❖ 概述现象 1. Nowadays, there follows a craze for diplomas and certificates in our society. 2. As more people focus on health diet, green food has begun to draw more and

more attention from the public.3. With the development of market economy, fake commodities are becoming amore and more serious problem.4. In the past two decades, China has experienced an alarming increase in teenagesmoking5.In recent years, there has been a dramatic increase in the number of schooldropouts inthe countryside.6. The early 90's witnessed an unprecedented tide of the workers flooding into bigcities7. In the past three decades. China has had dramatic improvement in the livingstandard ofpeople8.Ever sincethe beginning of market economy,advertisements has become anessentialpartofourdailylife.9. With banks'more focus on college market, an increasing number of collegestudentshaveappliedfora creditcard and begunto consumebyit10.Nowadavs there are more and more secondhand goods appearing in the market,such as secondhand books, furniture, appliances, cars and so on.心具体描述现象表现Nowadavs, we can easily find all kinds of computers everywhere, especially in1.largecities2.In the old davs only national leaders visited foreign countries.Nowadavs mutualvisits betweennationshavebeenextended totheprovincial ormunicipal level3.Grain,which used to be the main food of most people in China, is now playing aless important role in people's diet.4. Sports are so popular on campus that they have become an indispensable part ofcollege education.5. Almost every day we can see flashing fire engines rushing through the streets withtheir horns blaring.6.Miss Li's case is not unigue,and now more and more city adults spend theirleisure time trying to improve themselves at nightschool or college.7. We are surprised to learn that a pop singer can make over 100 thousand for oneperformance, while it may take several years for an ordinary farmer to earn that much.8.What amazes us most is that somefake commodities are quite similar to the realones9. The schoolbags on their shoulders are getting heavier and heavier, and the hoursspent on homeworklonger and longer.设计亮点---描述图片亮点句式The presented picture is funny, but it reflects a serious problem in education.102)The exaggerating/ironic picture tells us the increasing use of the cell phone inpeople's life.3)From the picture we can see the impact of internet on the way peoplecommunicate

more attention from the public. 3. With the development of market economy, fake commodities are becoming a more and more serious problem. 4. In the past two decades, China has experienced an alarming increase in teenage smoking. 5. In recent years, there has been a dramatic increase in the number of school dropouts in the countryside. 6. The early 90’s witnessed an unprecedented tide of the workers flooding into big cities 7. In the past three decades, China has had dramatic improvement in the living standard of people. 8. Ever since the beginning of market economy, advertisements has become an essential part of our daily life. 9. With banks’ more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it. 10. Nowadays there are more and more secondhand goods appearing in the market, such as secondhand books, furniture, appliances, cars and so on. ❖ 具体描述现象表现 1. Nowadays, we can easily find all kinds of computers everywhere, especially in large cities. 2. In the old days only national leaders visited foreign countries. Nowadays mutual visits between nations have been extended to the provincial or municipal level. 3. Grain, which used to be the main food of most people in China, is now playing a less important role in people’s diet. 4. Sports are so popular on campus that they have become an indispensable part of college education. 5. Almost every day we can see flashing fire engines rushing through the streets with their horns blaring. 6. Miss Li’s case is not unique, and now more and more city adults spend their leisure time trying to improve themselves at night school or college. 7. We are surprised to learn that a pop singer can make over 100 thousand for one performance, while it may take several years for an ordinary farmer to earn that much. 8. What amazes us most is that some fake commodities are quite similar to the real ones. 9. The schoolbags on their shoulders are getting heavier and heavier, and the hours spent on homework longer and longer. 设计亮点-描述图片亮点句式 1） The presented picture is funny, but it reflects a serious problem in education. 2） The exaggerating/ironic picture tells us the increasing use of the cell phone in people’s life. 3） From the picture we can see the impact of internet on the way people communicate

4) The picture implies education simply means learning to obtain information5The picture alerts us to a fact that nowadays most young people have no ideawhat college is for.设计亮点---说明原因类亮点句式（第二段）引出原因1. There are many factors explaining/accounting for/ contributing to this phenomenon. Firstof all/ Above all... Moreover,..Besides, .2. There are a large number of reasons for this social phenomenon, but in general they comedown to three major ones..Firstly,... Secondly, .. Finally, ..3. There are several reasons which may account for my preference of the program.4. There are two main reasons behind this phenomenon. First, ... Second,..5. There are mainly three reasons forcollege students to take a work-study program.6. There are many factors deciding/influencing my choosing future job.7.The reasons for this phenomenon mainly lie in the following two aspects.8. This extravagant spending is mainly caused by/due to the following factors.9.The following reasons can accounting for/are responsible for the popularity of onlineshopping1o.Thefollowingthreefactors contributetothe conflict.11.Why does “blog"become so popular in such a short time?12.But what lead to the conflict between parental hopes and personal ideals?心列举原因1. One of the main reasons for this change is that the ling standard of Chinesepeople has been improved greatly2. Among these reasons, the enrollment expansion of universities plavs a very vitalimportant role.3. The interest is an important factor which influences/ decides_one student'schoosing an elective class.4. The weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is (also) anoticeable reason5. Poor parents in rural areas cannot afford the high education for children, whichbecomes a main reason for their children's getting poor in the future.6.More and morevehicles on road increase the chances of accidents7.More and more people become aware that those disasters have much todo withwhatwehavedonetotheearth.8.Secondhand goods transactions make it possiblefor people to makegood use ofthegoodswhichmay beuseless intheirhands.9. A part-time job can help release financial burdens on those poor students, andhence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money.10. This results in/ leads to /produces a decreased chance for any individualgraduatetofind a job1l.Someteachersclassescould notattract studentsinterests sothat some students

4） The picture implies education simply means learning to obtain information. 5） The picture alerts us to a fact that nowadays most young people have no idea what college is for. 设计亮点-说明原因类亮点句式（第二段） ❖ 引出原因 1. There are many factors explaining/accounting for/ contributing to this phenomenon. First of all/ Above all,. Moreover, . Besides, . 2. There are a large number of reasons for this social phenomenon, but in general they come down to three major ones. Firstly, . Secondly, . Finally, . 3. There are several reasons which may account for my preference of the program. 4. There are two main reasons behind this phenomenon. First, . Second, . 5. There are mainly three reasons for college students to take a work-study program. 6. There are many factors deciding/ influencing my choosing future job. 7. The reasons for this phenomenon mainly lie in the following two aspects. 8. This extravagant spending is mainly caused by/due to the following factors. 9. The following reasons can accounting for/ are responsible for the popularity of online shopping. 10. The following three factors contribute to the conflict. 11. Why does “blog” become so popular in such a short time? 12. But what lead to the conflict between parental hopes and personal ideals? ❖ 列举原因 1. One of the main reasons for this change is that the ling standard of Chinese people has been improved greatly 2. Among these reasons, the enrollment expansion of universities plays a very vital/ important role. 3. The interest is an important factor which influences/ decides one student’s choosing an elective class. 4. The weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is (also) a noticeable reason. 5. Poor parents in rural areas cannot afford the high education for children, which becomes a main reason for their children’s getting poor in the future. 6. More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents. 7. More and more people become aware that those disasters have much to do with what we have done to the earth. 8. Secondhand goods transactions make it possible for people to make good use of the goods which may be useless in their hands. 9. A part-time job can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. 10. This results in/ leads to /produces a decreased chance for any individual graduate to find a job. 11. Some teachers’ classes could not attract students’ interests so that some students

would rather skip classes.12. Because of /Due to the poor Internet administration and weak network security,ourinformationmightbeopen,stolenorsold设计亮点--说明危害亮点句式引出危害1.However,problems may also arise.2.These immoral behaviors have brought great bad/negative effects on our societyHowever, loosening the limit of age and marriage might bring some problems.3.4.Noise brings great harm to our daily lives.However, the use of the disposable convenience goods is extremely harmful in many5.wavs.It is very clear that this phenomenon produces harmful effects in many aspects.67.Psychological problems are likelyto lead tovery serious resultsOn the other hand/ as every coin has two sides._private tutoring had also some8.disadvantages9However, many others hold that the holiday economy do more harm than good10. In fact, depression affects not only one's mind but also his body.11.However, deciding everything for children does no good but harm to them inmanywavs.12. Though most students take seats in advance for the purpose of better study, this kind ofphenomenonhadgreatnegativeeffects.13.A smart use of reference books is certainly beneficial, but the misuse and over use ifthem may cause a lot of problems.14.Ifthis trendcontinues,itwill exert undesirable/disastrous effect/influence.心列举危害First, the travel craze puts a heavy burden on the traffic system.1.2.Second, thousands of tourists swarm into scenic spots, causing over-crowdedness andsafetyproblemsSecondly, some students rely on the referencebooks too much,which is unfavorable to3.the improvement of their ability to work out the solutions by themselvesThirdly, there are some reference books filled with mistakes, which might mislead4.students.Finally, disposable products make people develop a throwaway habit, which is harmful0tooursocialatmosphereOn theone hand,it is a selfish behavior,which damages other students'interests6.For one thing,married students have to make care of their families, which brings moredifficulties for school management.For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupil's time that he can hardly find enough8.time for rest and entertainment.9. Many college students are too much indulged in these games so that their health andacademicperformancesareseriouslyaffected

would rather skip classes. 12. Because of /Due to the poor Internet administration and weak network security, our information might be open, stolen or sold. 设计亮点-说明危害亮点句式 ❖ 引出危害 1. However, problems may also arise. 2. These immoral behaviors have brought great bad/ negative effects on our society. 3. However, loosening the limit of age and marriage might bring some problems. 4. Noise brings great harm to our daily lives. 5. However, the use of the disposable convenience goods is extremely harmful in many ways. 6. It is very clear that this phenomenon produces harmful effects in many aspects. 7. Psychological problems are likely to lead to very serious results. 8. On the other hand/ as every coin has two sides, private tutoring had also some disadvantages. 9. However, many others hold that the holiday economy do more harm than good. 10. In fact, depression affects not only one’s mind but also his body. 11. However, deciding everything for children does no good but harm to them in many ways. 12. Though most students take seats in advance for the purpose of better study, this kind of phenomenon had great negative effects. 13. A smart use of reference books is certainly beneficial, but the misuse and over use if them may cause a lot of problems. 14. If this trend continues, it will exert undesirable/ disastrous effect/ influence. ❖ 列举危害 1. First, the travel craze puts a heavy burden on the traffic system. 2. Second, thousands of tourists swarm into scenic spots, causing over-crowdedness and safety problems. 3. Secondly, some students rely on the reference books too much, which is unfavorable to the improvement of their ability to work out the solutions by themselves. 4. Thirdly, there are some reference books filled with mistakes, which might mislead students. 5. Finally, disposable products make people develop a throwaway habit, which is harmful to our social atmosphere. 6. On the one hand, it is a selfish behavior, which damages other students’ interests. 7. For one thing, married students have to make care of their families, which brings more difficulties for school management. 8. For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupil’s time that he can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment. 9. Many college students are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are seriously affected

10. Moreover, one's violating public morality not only invades others' benefits but alsoharmto himself.11.More seriouslv/Even worse/ What's worse, depression is one of the main reasons thatpeoplekillthemselves.12. These disasters have killed millions of people, destroved countless homes, and wipedout numerous piecesoffertileland13. Long exposure to noise will lead to the loss of hearing and possibly drive people mad.14.Forexample,if mostpeoplebuypiratedproducts, those original productswill suffergreat damage and might lose_the enthusiasm to continue their producing, which inturninfluencesconsumers

10. Moreover, one’s violating public morality not only invades others’ benefits but also harm to himself. 11. More seriously/Even worse/ What’s worse, depression is one of the main reasons that people kill themselves. 12. These disasters have killed millions of people, destroyed countless homes, and wiped out numerous pieces of fertile land. 13. Long exposure to noise will lead to the loss of hearing and possibly drive people mad. 14. For example, if most people buy pirated products, those original products will suffer great damage and might lose the enthusiasm to continue their producing, which in turn influences consumers