《大学英语读写》课程教学资源（A）Ⅱ_大学英语读写（A）Ⅱ_Book3.Unit1.Writing1

SentenceStructureProblemsWhat's wrong with the following sentences?To please the visitors, a cross talk was performed.1.Without telling anyone, even her sister, Mary,2. going to the park, meeting her friends.The physics problems were just impossible, they3.took all day to do.That the course was so hard we all studied day4.and night, with no one getting an A or a B.5. I knocked at the door when the lady came I gaveher most ingratiating smile

Sentence Structure Problems What’s wrong with the following sentences? 1. To please the visitors, a cross talk was performed. 2. Without telling anyone, even her sister, Mary, going to the park, meeting her friends. 3. The physics problems were just impossible, they took all day to do. 4. That the course was so hard we all studied day and night, with no one getting an A or a B. 5. I knocked at the door when the lady came I gave her most ingratiating smile

FourTypesof CommonProblems残缺句(1) Sentence Fragments 业粘连包/接排包(2) Run-on Sentences误置修饰语(3) Misplaced Modifiers (4）DanglingModifiers悬垂修饰语

Four Types of Common Problems (1) Sentence Fragments 残缺句 (2) Run-on Sentences 粘连句/接排句 (3) Misplaced Modifiers 误置修饰语 (4) Dangling Modifiers 悬垂修饰语

(1) Sentence Fragments. Having driven across the desert. We enjoyed thecoolweather.Corrected : Having driven across the desert, weenjoyed the cool weather.. Having no money and being lonely in the big city.Corrected : Having no money and being lonely in thebig city, the old woman committed suicide

(1) Sentence Fragments • Having driven across the desert. We enjoyed the cool weather. Corrected：Having driven across the desert, we enjoyed the cool weather. • Having no money and being lonely in the big city. Corrected： Having no money and being lonely in the big city, the old woman committed suicide

PracticeRevisethefollowingfragmentsinone or moreways.1. He made a point of entering each misspelledword in a notebook. Which he kept for thatpurpose.2. It was a wonderful week. Fishing andswimming every day and dancing everynight

Practice Revise the following fragments in one or more ways. 1. He made a point of entering each misspelled word in a notebook. Which he kept for that purpose. 2. It was a wonderful week. Fishing and swimming every day and dancing every night

(2)Run-OnSentences粘连包句（接排句）就是两个或更多的包子混合交织在一起，没有正确的标点或连接词标明关系的句子。. I called for a reservation at a famous restaurant intown, all the tables were taken before the DragonBoat Festival.Corrected:Icalledforareservationatafamousrestaurant in town, but/: however,/ all the tablesweretakenbeforetheDragonBoat Festival

粘连句 (接排句)就是两个或更多的句子混合交织在一 起，没有正确的标点或连接词标明关系的句子。 • I called for a reservation at a famous restaurant in town, all the tables were taken before the Dragon Boat Festival. • Corrected：I called for a reservation at a famous restaurant in town, but/; however,/ all the tables were taken before the Dragon Boat Festival. (2) Run-On Sentences

PracticeRevisethefollowing run-onsentences. Women no longer need to move into thetraditionally male professions theyhave alreadyopened most of the doors to desirable careerpaths. Utah is famous for her scenery and friendly peopleand I love living in this state particularly

Practice Revise the following run-on sentences • Women no longer need to move into the traditionally male professions they have already opened most of the doors to desirable career paths. • Utah is famous for her scenery and friendly people and I love living in this state particularly

(3)MisplacedModifiers误置修饰语，亦称“修饰语错位”，在修饰语和其所修饰的中心词之间不恰当地夹进了其他成分。. He sold the old car to the man with leather seats. The robber was described as a six-foot-tall manwith a mustache weighing 15o pounds.Corrected: He sold the old car with leather seats tothe man.· Corrected: The robber was described as a 15o-pound, six-foot-tall man with a mustache

(3) Misplaced Modifiers 误置修饰语，亦称“修饰语错位”，在修饰语和其所 修饰的中心词之间不恰当地夹进了其他成分。 • He sold the old car to the man with leather seats. • The robber was described as a six-foot-tall man with a mustache weighing 150 pounds. • Corrected: He sold the old car with leather seats to the man. • Corrected: The robber was described as a 150- pound, six-foot-tall man with a mustache

PracticeIdentifythemisplacedwordorwordsineachsentence.1. Our team didn't even score once.2. She is teaching a seminar this term on marketeconomy at the Osaka International University.3. The city almost spent twenty million dollars on thenew stadium.4. Tony bought an old car from a crooked dealer witha faulty transmission.5. The suburbs nearly had five inches of rain

Practice Identify the misplaced word or words in each sentence. 1. Our team didn't even score once. 2. She is teaching a seminar this term on market economy at the Osaka International University. 3. The city almost spent twenty million dollars on the new stadium. 4. Tony bought an old car from a crooked dealer with a faulty transmission. 5. The suburbs nearly had five inches of rain

(4)DanglingModifiers. To write well, good books must be read.. Corrected: To write well, I must read good books. To write the proposal, research must be done.· Corrected: To write the proposal, the professormust first do some research.非限定性动词短语作状语时，易形成悬垂性修饰语

(4) Dangling Modifiers • To write well, good books must be read. • Corrected: To write well, I must read good books. • To write the proposal, research must be done. • Corrected: To write the proposal, the professor must first do some research. 非限定性动词短语作状语时，易形成悬垂性修饰语

PracticePleaserevisethefollowing sentences with danglingmodifiers.Thumbing through the magazine, her eyes1.automatically noticed the cosmetic ads.To please the visitors, a cross talk was performed2.On entering the teacher's office, a terrestrial3.globe caught his attention.Though only seventeen, the army accepted his4.application.返回本章目录

Practice Please revise the following sentences with dangling modifiers. 1. Thumbing through the magazine, her eyes automatically noticed the cosmetic ads. 2. To please the visitors, a cross talk was performed. 3. On entering the teacher's office, a terrestrial globe caught his attention. 4. Though only seventeen, the army accepted his application