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Summer vocation Last summer,Dad,Mom,Tim,and Tara went to the beach in Florida.They swam,fished,built sandcastles, and went sailing.Mom brought a picnic lunch.She spread a blanket on the sand and set out ham sandwiches,potato chips,apples,and coolies.She brought lemonade in the cooler.Later.Tim and Tara walked along he beach and saw a crab walking sideways.A stray dog was barking at it.A starfish had washed up on the beach,too.Tim threw bread crumbs up in the air to feed a flock of seagulls.Then the family went back to the hotel,and Time and Tara played video games until bedtime

Last summer, Dad, Mom , Tim, and Tara went to the beach in Florida. They swam, fished, built sandcastles, and went sailing. 😀Mom brought a picnic lunch. She spread a blanket on the sand and set out ham sandwiches, potato chips, apples, and coolies. She brought lemonade in the cooler. Later. 😀Tim and Tara walked along he beach and saw a crab walking sideways. A stray dog was barking at it. A starfish had washed up on the beach, too. Tim threw bread crumbs up in the air to feed a flock of seagulls. Then the family went back to the hotel, and Time and Tara played video games until bedtime

67.1分作文 4上一篇 第1494350号作文 下一篇 As far back as I can remember my father always wears a pair of washed white jeans.As time went on,his face became more and more wrinkled.Although he is now forty years old,his body is like a mountain that holds up the future for me.Since I was six years old,there has been a black box in my house.I often see my father put some money into it.This continued until I was twelve. That year I stole some money from the box to buy expensive basketball.That was the first time my father scolded me,and I ran out of the house.Then I learned that my father had been looking for me all day.When I was back,I heard my father said my mother:"I'm very sorry I was so harsh,I didn't give son a toy as a child,I just want some money to help him in the future in the box".I know home is not rich,but this father's love makes me feel warmth in humble home,although the love is not obvious

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As far back as I can remember my father always wears a pair of washed white jeans.As time went on,his face became more and more wrinkled.Although he is now forty years old,his body is like a mountain that holds up the future for me. When I thought of my father,a clear impressive view came into my mind.(An old gray patched T-shirt),a pair of washed white jeans.Deep wrinkles carved on her forehead.(Dark brown skin and spotted white hairs are hardly to believe he was just in his forties. He was hold me up like a great mountain. Tps:细节刻画，使人物在脑海当中活起来。 总分原则，有一个topic sentence。 遵循观察顺序：如外貌整体、细节刻画

As far back as I can remember my father always wears a pair of washed white jeans. As time went on, his face became more and more wrinkled. Although he is now forty years old, his body is like a mountain that holds up the future for me. When I thought of my father, a clear impressive view came into my mind. (An old gray patched T-shirt), a pair of washed white jeans. Deep wrinkles carved on her forehead. (Dark brown skin and spotted white hairs are hardly to believe he was just in his forties.) He was hold me up like a great mountain. Tips：细节刻画，使人物在脑海当中活起来。 总分原则，有一个topicsentence。 遵循观察顺序：如外貌整体、细节刻画

Since I was six years old,there has been a black box in my house.I often see my father put some money into it.This continued until I was twelve.That year I stole some money from the box to buy expensive basketball.That was the first time my father scolded me,and I ran out of the house.Then I learned that my father had been looking for me all day.When I was back,I heard my father said my mother: I'm very sorry I was so harsh,I didn't give son a toy as a child,I just want some money to help him in the future in the box".I know home is not rich,but this father's love makes me feel warmth in humble home,although the love is not obvious. When I was six years old,I clearly remembered there was a black box putting aside(the TV set),I saw my father always put some money into the slot. He continued to accumulated money until I was twelve. As a teenager,I was fascinated to playing basketball,and many of my classmates had bought their own balls.I was dreaming to buy a SPAILDING ball too,imagining how cool a boy was to play such a shiny ball on the basketball field.I dared not to ask such an expensive ball from dad.When I thought of the black box,I got a great idea.I slipped into the bedroom,picking out the money slightly from the box and dashed out. There was no doubt I was detected.It was the first time I was hardly scolded by my dad,and I ran away from my home.(续写故事)

Since I was six years old, there has been a black box in my house. I often see my father put some money into it . This continued until I was twelve. That year I stole some money from the box to buy expensive basketball. That was the first time my father scolded me, and I ran out of the house. Then l learned that my father had been looking for me all day. When I was back, I heard my father said my mother:" I'm very sorry I was so harsh, I didn't give son a toy as a child, I just want some money to help him in the future in the box". I know home is not rich, but this father's love makes me feel warmth in humble home, although the love is not obvious. When I was six years old, I clearly remembered there was a black box putting aside (the TV set),I saw my father always put some money into the slot. He continued to accumulated money until I was twelve. As a teenager, I was fascinated to playing basketball, and many of my classmates had bought their own balls. I was dreaming to buy a SPAILDING ball too, imagining how cool a boy was to play such a shiny ball on the basketball field. I dared not to ask such an expensive ball from dad. When I thought of the black box, I got a great idea. I slipped into the bedroom, picking out the money slightly from the box and dashed out. There was no doubt I was detected. It was the first time I was hardly scolded by my dad, and I ran away from my home.(续写故事）

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