上海交通大学：公共管理类《专业英语》课程教学资源（PPT课件）第十五讲 申请文书作业的问题——错别字

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申请文书作业的问题 ·错别字 Shanghai Jiaotong University (SJTU),Shanghai,China Sept 2014-Present School of International and Public Affairs (SIPA). Bachelor of Public Administration (expected June 2018) GPA:87/100 (overall);Ranking:16/71. Awards: Acadamic Excellence Scholarship of SJTU(2015-2016). Core Courses:Principle of Sociology,Public Administration Science, Microeconomics,Macroeconomics, Public economics, Quantitative Research Methods. Australian National University,Canberra,Australia July 2016-Nov.2016 Exchange Student Courses:Foundation of Einance,International Politica Ecnomy, ntroductory Mathematical Statistics Comtemporary olitic Analysis

 错别字

申请文书作业的问题 ·长度 。简历最好1页，不要超过2页 。I或2页都要写满，不要出现一页半的情况 可以通过增加减少内容，或者调整字体/行 距/页边距等多种方式修改 ·问题 。有一位同学简历写了5页，过长 。很多位同学写了页半

 长度 ◦ 简历最好1页，不要超过2页 ◦ 1或2页都要写满，不要出现一页半的情况 ◦ 可以通过增加减少内容，或者调整字体/行 距/页边距等多种方式修改  问题 ◦ 有一位同学简历写了5页，过长 ◦ 很多位同学写了1页半

申请文书作业的问题 。格式的一致性 Shanghai Jiaotong University (SJTU),Shanghai,China Sept 2014-Present School of International and Public Affairs (SIPA). Bachelor of Public Administration(expected June 2018) GPA:87/100 (overall);Ranking:16/71. Awards:Acadamic Excellence Scholarship of SJTU(2015-2016). Core Courses:Principle of Sociology,Public Administration Science, Microeconomics,Macroeconomics,Public economics, Quantitative Research Methods. Australian National University,Canberra,Australia July 2016-Nov.2016 Exchange Student. Courses:Foundation of Finance,International Political Ecnomy,Introductory Mathematical Statistics,Comtemporary Politic Analysis

 格式的一致性

申请文书作业的问题 ·个人信息 。照片：如果要放，需要是正装照，或者至 少比较正式的照片 。信息：出生日期、性别、国籍、户籍等一 般不出现在个人信息中 JanePark Date of birth:16.02.1995. Email:janepark@sjtu.edu.cn. Citizenship:Republic of Korea. Mobile phone:+8615618541812. Gender:Female. Current location:Shanghai,Xuhui district

 个人信息 ◦ 照片：如果要放，需要是正装照，或者至 少比较正式的照片 ◦ 信息：出生日期、性别、国籍、户籍等一 般不出现在个人信息中

申请文书作业的问题 教育背景 。把学校、学院、专业写对 。如果GPA不高，建议不写 EDUCATION:Shanghai jiao tong University.Shanghai.China 2017 International College and Public affairs.(GPA 3.0 /4.5 ) EDUCATION Shanghai Jiao Tong University,Shanghai,China Bachelor of Engineering in Administration(expected in 07.2019) GPA (overall):3.5/4.3;Ranking:19/52

 教育背景 ◦ 把学校、学院、专业写对 ◦ 如果GPA不高，建议不写

申请文书作业的问题 ·工作/科研经验（普遍问题 。STAR原则 。不要简单的写participated/involved/, responsible... 。要突出你具体做了什么(action)? 。有哪些特点和创新？ 。反映了你怎样的personality? WORK EXPERIENCE 2013-2016 Shanghai Pudong Youth Activity Center,China Volunteer as class assistance Helped the professor to give art and hand-craft classes to primary school children every holiday during 2013-2016; Volunteered to open an art exhibit with the professors and volunteered to be a guide for 3 months

 工作/科研经验（普遍问题） ◦ STAR原则 ◦ 不要简单的写participated/ involved/ responsible… ◦ 要突出你具体做了什么（action）? ◦ 有哪些特点和创新? ◦ 反映了你怎样的personality?

申请文书作业的问题 ·相对比较好的案例 INTERNSHIP EXPERIENCE ◆Unilever OMO MKT Summer Intern 2017.07-2017.08 Lead EC page master design of project Sophie II.Find real consumer insight of each variant and lead communication development (incl.copy,sensorial image illustration)across function and with agency to OTIF deliver 48 master design and 12 glorified image of 7 new product. Lead Sophie II product video creation for EC page and sell-in.Work out demo methodology with R&D team and lead foot script writing with agency to OTIF deliver 6 creative video for sell-in within 2 months. Lead Sophie soap powder relaunch.Deliver superior claim for OMO soap powder and deliver AW revise to promote relaunch project OTIF. Inspiration Forum [Vice President] 2014.09-2017.05 Inspiration Forum is an organization in SJTU responsible for hosting lectures presented by prominent guests from various fields,whose guests include Tsung-Dao Lee,Elaine Chao,Yang Liwei. Responsible for the overall arrangement of holding lectures,including inviting and welcoming guests, conducting propaganda,designing posters and managing lecture scenes. Responsible for arranging team-building activities,including trainings,meetings and group trips to Tianjin and Xiamen. Responsible for the Wechat Subscription Followers rose from around 2000 to 11000 in two semesters

 相对比较好的案例

申请文书作业的问题 ·工作/科研经验 。三要素：公司/团体，职位，时间 。必须指出具体的职位 。同一个公司/社团，不同的职位差异很大 Experience. INTERN CHINA COMMERCIAL FOREIGN TRADE CORPORATION 2016.07-2016.08. Support to collect important data in mall,such as pedestrian volume. Support to finish the report. INTERN LOREAL CHINA 2017.09 TILL NOW. Monitor and analyze the online sales activity;Analyze and draw conclusions on specific ecommerce KPIs;Finish weekly&monthly report. Support online social activity;Work cross-functionally to help develop appropriate content;Review the Social and Community component and content of digital marketing campaigns. Others:Purchasing order tracking;Campaign support;PPT polish;Internal order etc

 工作/科研经验 ◦ 三要素：公司/团体，职位，时间 ◦ 必须指出具体的职位 ◦ 同一个公司/社团，不同的职位差异很大

申请文书作业的问题 ·其他 0 Skl不要过于简单，每一个说明最好给出 例证 。不要忘记写英语和汉语 如果有接受度比较高的方言也可以写上， 例如Cantonese SKILLS. CET-6. French. Word,Excel,PPT

 其他 ◦ Skill 不要过于简单，每一个说明最好给出 例证 ◦ 不要忘记写英语和汉语 ◦ 如果有接受度比较高的方言也可以写上， 例如Cantonese