《大学综合英语》课程教学资源（PPT课件讲稿）Unit 5 英文感谢信 A Letter of Thanks

t;计 Unit 5 Letter of thanks LOGO

LOGO Unit 5 Letter of Thanks

Unit 5 Add your company slogan Contents Main sentence Problems 3 2) Letter of Thanks 3 Writing Practice

Unit 5 Contents Add your company slogan. 2 Letter of Thanks Writing Practice 3 1 Main Sentence Problems 3

Main Sentence Problems (3) ☆ Confusing Shifts(转换混乱) ☆ Choppy Sentences(断续句)

Main Sentence Problems (3) ❖Confusing Shifts（转换混乱） ❖Choppy Sentences （断续句）

Confusing Shifts Writers should keep the elements in a sentence consistent, avoiding any unnecessary changes in tense, voice mood, person number, and discourse. Such unnecessary changes, or shifts, may make reading difficult and obscure the sentence's meaning for the reader

Confusing Shifts ❖Writers should keep the elements in a sentence consistent, avoiding any unnecessary changes in tense, voice, mood, person, number, and discourse. Such unnecessary changes, or "shifts," may make reading difficult and obscure the sentence's meaning for the reader

Confusing Shifts 1. Confusing Shifts in Person 2. Confusing Shifts in Tense 3. Confusing Shifts in Subject Voice 4. Confusing Shifts in Mood or speech 5. Confusing Shifts in Number 6. Mixed Sentence Construction

Confusing Shifts 1. Confusing Shifts in Person 2. Confusing Shifts in Tense 3. Confusing Shifts in Subject & Voice 4. Confusing Shifts in Mood or Speech 5. Confusing Shifts in Number 6. Mixed Sentence Construction

e.g. HHow to improve it?) (1)If all we do in life is complaint, then one shouldn't be surprised if no one likes you

e.g.: (How to improve it?) (1) If all we do in life is complaint, then one shouldn’t be surprised if no one likes you

(Correction) (1)If all we do in life is complaint, then we shouldn't be surprised if no one likes us (2) If all you do in life is complaint, then you shouldn't be surprised if no one likes you (3)If all he does in life is complaint, then he shouldn't be surprised if no one likes

(Correction) (1) If all we do in life is complaint, then we shouldn’t be surprised if no one likes us. (2) If all you do in life is complaint, then you shouldn’t be surprised if no one likes you. (3) If all he does in life is complaint, then he shouldn’t be surprised if no one likes him

Study the following two sentences (A driver should never race your motor without a warm-up. never knew what to expect Q (2) When I was in high school, yo

Study the following two sentences: (1) A driver should never race your motor without a warm-up. (2) When I was in high school, you never knew what to expect

They should be corrected in the same person (A driver should never race his motor without a warm-up (2 When I was in high school, I never know what to expected

They should be corrected in the same person: (1) A driver should never race his motor without a warm-up. (2) When I was in high school, I never know what to expected

Point out the problems with in sentences and revise them (1When one is sick, you don't want compan A: When you are sick, you don't want company. B: When one is sick one doesn't want Company. C: When one is sick. he doesn't want company

Point out the problems with in sentences and revise them. (1)When one is sick, you don’t want company. A: When you are sick, you don’t want company. B: When one is sick, one doesn’t want company. C: When one is sick, he doesn’t want company